Advice from many good writers that I've gathered over the years.
THE HOOK
The opening paragraphs of a book are often called the hook—the opportunity to hook the reader on the book. Most successful openings include a change in the status quo—something is happening that makes the reader want to read further and find out how the characters deal with it and the outcome. The character or characters must be strong enough that the reader cares about them right away and wants to keep turning the pages. Pick an interesting event or create one and start the book with some kind of action and, possibly, dialogue. Dialogue should be short and snappy. Introduce at least one of the main characters and show the scene.
A hook should have three things:
1) where (place and time), 2) what's happening now, and 3) whose point of view.
Keep the beginning short. Leave past history out of the hook and the opening
scene. Save explanations, except for the absolute minimum the reader needs to
know at this point, until later. The part immediately following the opening
scene usually gives some background or history, but the beginning should be so
compelling that the reader resents being taken out of the immediate scene.
Don't start at the
beginning. Nothing is happening
there. Start in the middle of
things. In media res. Start as late as possible; as close to the end as
possible. The later you can start
without losing your readers, the better.
The beginning of your story must
do at least the following three things:
1. Get your story going and set the tone
2. Introduce and characterize the protagonist (the first
character you introduce should be the protagonist)
3. Engage
the reader's interest!
The opening
scene can also create mood, introduce the narrator or narrative voice,
introduce other characters, etc.
The
beginning of story lays down the promise for the rest of story and you have to
be willing to live by the rules you set. So be careful to open with the right
promise. Don’t promise humor and deliver tragedy. Don’t open with lyrical, poetic writing
unless that’s the tone of the story.

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